Our Presentation & The Feedback

As a group, we were assigned a task to make a presentation about our ideas so far regarding our opening sequence and were expected to use the information we collected as research and present it to the class. Here are some screenshots of our presentation:

After presenting, we recieved a lot of feedback on how our ideas could be developed or changed to fit with the genre, or the conventions of a opening sequence.
We had the class, a very friendly gentleman from the media examining board, and the wonderful Mr.Ayres to give us an insight into what we could do to improve our sequence and what needed to be developed or looked into.
In short, here is what the class's feedback was:

• Look into "Rosemarys Baby" and "Repulsion" for an insight into how our hallway scenes can be improved.
•  Pre-production Work (include a 9 frame analysis & mood board)
• Think of sounds I can use (real sounds), e.g. chalk on a board or things that generally make people feel uncomfortable
• Use suggestions and symbolism rather than direct P.O.V (look at opening of film "seven")
• Look into age ratings and certification further